Group Feedback

Group Feedback

What the Group Liked about the Trailer:

·        They thought that the text was good.

·        They thought that the flashbacks worked well.

·        They thought that the narrative was well built.

·        They enjoyed the suspense.

·        Thought that the music was good.

·        Well filmed, cool shot angles.

·        Production company logo was well made.

·        Good cinematography.

·        Good lighting in shed scene.

·        Shots were well framed.

What the group thinks needs improvement:

·        Soundtrack was a bit dull, needs some more jumps (heartbeats).

·        Not enough jumps, including a jump at the end.

·        Didn’t understand who the man was in the bench flashback scene.

·        Ends abruptly.

·        Scene with strangling/beating up man needs to be better explained.

·        Sound effects on impact moments.

·        Music needs a climax.

·        Narrative needs a better explanation.

·        Some of the shots of Keith were a bit too long.

·        Needs more quick, jumpy shots.

·        Too short overall.

·        Needs a montage at the end of Keith killing people.

·        Need to justify the red band.

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Shotlist

Choice of Trailer

Choice Of Trailer: Our trailer for our film Keith is going to be a mix between a scene and a highlights trailer. The main basis of the trailer will be a scene trailer, but with flashbacks over laid on top of other scenes in the film to create a ‘hybrid’ of the two. Our trailer is going to be a Redband trailer because we are going to use restricted narration and the flashback scenes are going to be quick, with minimal dialogue.



This is Henry: Portrait Of A Serial Killer and this trailer is along similar lines of what we want to make in our trailer.

Mood Board

We have selected images from Henry: Portrait of a Serial Killer, Se7en, Dexter(Television series, Scream, The Texas Chainsaw Massacre, Psycho and The Hills Have Eyes. We have chosen these images due to the killers in each film either being a very gory killer, or being a killer that we feel sympathy for. We have done this as these are two of the characteristics that our killer, Keith will have. We have chosen the killings in the film to be very gory as from personal ideas I have found that these are the most entertaining to watch, if done well. Keith also has a side to him that we feel sympathy for however, due to his troubled past and motifs for killing which relates to the images in the mood board.