Group Feedback

Group Feedback

What the Group Liked about the Trailer:

·        They thought that the text was good.

·        They thought that the flashbacks worked well.

·        They thought that the narrative was well built.

·        They enjoyed the suspense.

·        Thought that the music was good.

·        Well filmed, cool shot angles.

·        Production company logo was well made.

·        Good cinematography.

·        Good lighting in shed scene.

·        Shots were well framed.

What the group thinks needs improvement:

·        Soundtrack was a bit dull, needs some more jumps (heartbeats).

·        Not enough jumps, including a jump at the end.

·        Didn’t understand who the man was in the bench flashback scene.

·        Ends abruptly.

·        Scene with strangling/beating up man needs to be better explained.

·        Sound effects on impact moments.

·        Music needs a climax.

·        Narrative needs a better explanation.

·        Some of the shots of Keith were a bit too long.

·        Needs more quick, jumpy shots.

·        Too short overall.

·        Needs a montage at the end of Keith killing people.

·        Need to justify the red band.